West Wind at My Back
Wind shushes the wrens’ chatter with
a whoosh and branches’ clatter.
The breeze aloft paints clouds
left-to-right across day’s white
canvas sky in swift strokes of gray.
That’s the same direction
these words run, whispering
their questions, wondering at
mysteries this windy hand of man
doesn’t understand from arm’s-length.
The ah-ha hazy answers I leave for those
discerning, far-away cloud readers,
once I exhale onto this white page
these black marks, which, from afar,
look gray, neither-and-nor.
Like those clouds, these sentence strands
scud east always toward open space,
resolute in searching for discoveries,
all the while realizing that dawn’s
only someone else’s yesterday.
With special thanks for the creative exhilaration and happiness rays shipped east by my friend Catherine Mitchell Dudley.
Shared with the gang at dVerse Poets Pub for Open Link Night.



Beautiful, Joe…I love your imagery and descriptions…gorgeous
xox
So beautiful. I was pushed around everywhere by your windy words.
A lovely word sketch.
nice joe…love esp. the ah-ha hazy answers ….very cool
Other people’s left-over hours.
What a thought.
Still, this is recycling of sorts. I am always struck by the fact that under the cupola of the atmosphere, we breathe in other continents’ exhaled breath. And nuclear experiments, of course. Sigh.
ha…cool thought you end on as there are always people ahead of us…but then again our life is not dictated by what they do with it…
Oh, I love this one… from the photo to that wonderful ending…
grey is my favorite color…
A lovely read, Joe. This is what I love about your work. I find your poetry earthy and appeals to the human senses. Some of us are to abstract. You keep us earthly grounded. A wonderful poem sir.
The wind coming from the west is generally good news here. East winds are cold, but that’s what we have just now. I love “dawn is only someone’s yesterday.”
Joe, a beautiful write!
This made me sigh.
We should always search as the clouds their resting place and the waters their depths…
Ah. Very clever. k.
Beautiful imagery in the first two stanzas, then you captured me with exhaling onto the white page… great job!
I enjoyed the ‘windy’ rhythm, the inner rhymes that moved us along through the poem. Nice journey!
Hi Joe. It has been awhile since I dropped by. And I am so glad I did. Great to enjoy a poem on nature for its beauty – and suddenly, you realize this has a very soul searching quality to it.
Wow, I totally enjoyed this. Superb allegory between the clouds, thoughts, words and print. All eluding to Mind. Very well done. A fantastic morning read for me.