Vagrant thoughts pass through
their dreamless minds,
indigent vagaries of consciousness
upon these, the sleepless ones,
during the nights so dark and quiet
they can hear their homeless hearts
flip on the mattress tops, or
the screeching swoosh of skin tossed
‘neath sheets, and sense the sighs
of one inhalation,
and one exhalation,
like the wind through a lost cave.
It is a call of life spent too alone
or at least too lonely.
But once they repose to recall
those times that their hearts would race
at the touch of the other,
the tender bow-draw music
of skin stroking skin, and
the echoing silver-chained harmonies
of two breathing a lullaby as comforting
as any the angels might sing,
they fall into their dreams of together.
Cold and empty are the arms
that come too soon, too cruelly, and
awaken them from this time spent
wrapped in the timeless, the embrace
of their unseen but so-real lovers.
© 2013 Joseph Hesch
*sigh*
Sighing here, too…just beautiful, dear Joe ❤ xox
Wow, gave my heart an ache. So lovely…
oh the longing of being together again can just be felt in every single line…
those last five lines….on the cruelty of those coming to take it away…..yeah, felt that joe…that picture is amazing too…sat here staring at it a while until i made it out…nice verse sir
Deeply evocative and wonderfully constructed Joe. Must visit moe often.
yes lovely piece good sir – you had from the opening image
another sigh… just gorgeous. heartfelt, bittersweet, truth.
Sad, but incredibly beautiful. The longing is felt in your words, Joe.
Another sighing female, checking in. Gorgeous.
And yet, sir, as the fires burn low, and passion gives way to respect, rest, and deeper love, the honeymoon may be over but the relationship is deepening; as it should be & do. Great romantic poem, Joe.
Excellent.
so much emotions in your lines
Just beautiful!
ah, beautiful. yes, do add me to the ‘sighing front’.
“they can hear their homeless hearts
flip on the mattress tops”
love these lines, so cool!
All beautiful, but my favourite lines are these:
“But once they repose to recall
those times that their hearts would race
at the touch of the other,
the tender bow-draw music
of skin stroking skin”
I love the way this image captures both the sound and the movement of one person gently stroking the skin of another.
first stanza is so many of my nights lately…well described
Sigh….
Just gorgeous Joe
I’m all for the silver chained harmonies….well done;)
lovely – thanks for hosting tonight!
heartbreakingly beautiful………..
Lovely flow… and you made me ponder the inevitability of aloneness, even as one who has been part of a couple for decades. Sad!
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Wow, I loved this. The words “homeless hearts” stuck with me.
This is sad Joe. I thought of lonely homeless hearts, but your words made me think of the actually homeless too, awakened brusquely by those who don’t want to see them. Maybe I’m too literal. Still, I love the tenderness of this.
This is beautiful, it makes me imagine some far off faces brought together in serendipity like Amelie. I love the comparison of skin on skin to bow string music and their homeless hearts, you make hope out of insomnia- brilliant.
well this made me sad 😥 which is great! right here is powerful stuff… something new to grab in each line… very nice weaving joe
Really touching poem,
passionate and wistful..
bow draw music..beautiful
This is very well done.
Full of love, loss and longing.
You nailed this … homeless hearts, tender bow-drawn music… wow.
Beautiful!
When I first read “homeless hearts” I thought your poem was going to echo mine…and it does in a way. As I think when they are asleep out there alone perhaps they do awaken coldly and cruely to what awaits them from where they were held…in a sense…by the embrace of their timeless, yet “unseen but so-real lover”. This is so beautifully written, Joe.
the tender bow-draw music
of skin stroking skin, and
the echoing silver-chained harmonies
of two breathing a lullaby as comforting
as any the angels might sing,
they fall into their dreams of together. -> really describes a string section!!
Joe, really enjoyed this one. Written with such tenderness, each word adding to the effect.
….the feeling of emptiness is so visible… longing that seems so long ago…. a sincere sentiments though… smiles…
Hauntingly beautiful, Joe …
Wow. One can just about claim to hear the music reading this.
Haunting… wistful… sublime
Beautiful…
Intoxicatingly lovely.
It’s leaves with many thoughts. It was a great read
‘Vagrant thoughts’ indeed. This poem speaks to me of sadness, beautifully worded and carefully written, but an overall sadness leaps forth.
stunning. while the second stanza, for a moment, breathes life into the loneliness the final notes bring it back. Still it is easy to get lost in the feeling invoked within those beautiful harmonies.
What a depthful, beautiful (though sad) write. I could feel the emotion, the aloneness.
You’ve captured that feeling of being too alone, of loneliness. At my age people begin to lose their spouses and I’ve recently walked through this with others. Though I worked with death and dying for so long, it’s a new perspective as that reality creeps ever closer. Of course, there are other loses as well. But….
Nice words!
Very sad, but told beautifully. My mother just lost my dad after sixty years marriage -so hard. k.
A very beautiful poetry, contains many verses exciting, but I like especially the final.
This is heartbreaking and evocative. I got the feeling of two loves, one of reality and one of fantasy and the starkness one brings to the other. Just beautiful!