“Can I touch one, Mama?” Cody asked.
“I don’t know if that would be wise,” I told her as I pushed the hair back from her eyes.
“But she’s so beautiful. Look how the wind blows her hair just like mine.”
I looked them over, watching how they moved around the enclosure and finally said, “We don’t know if we can trust how tame they are. There’s a good reason they’re behind this four-wire fence. I’ve heard the mothers can be pretty protective of their babies.”
“Pleeeze, can’t I just once? I’ll be careful,” Cody pleaded in that whiney way of hers. I noticed her edging closer to the fence, just as one of the colts ambled nearer to us.
“Cody, I said wait. You don’t know them and they don’t know you. It’s like we’re from different planets, far from home. Lord knows we are.”
I never liked it when we went on these summer trips, even when I was younger. I remember one year my cousin…
“Look, she likes me,” Cody said as she and one of the young ones reached through the fence for one another.
“Cody!” I screamed, just as the colt’s mother came running over. Both kids jumped and scratched themselves on the fence. The mare pushed her little one away favoring a cut on her floppy little white forehoof.
“See? And that’s why they keep them on the other side of the fence,” I told Cody as I licked the blood off her nose.
Here’s a tortured (and whinnied) 250-word first draft bit of flash fiction written for Cara Michaels’ #MondayMenage thingy. A triple-header of prompts here. One: that photo. Two: the phrase “far from home.” And three: The concept of Trust. Someday I’ll figure out if there’s something deeper involved in what my imagination spit out in these words. (I think there might be.) Well see, if I ever cross its fenceline for a proper revision.